Privatization of marines

Writing instructions:

(editing the attached essay)

  • Page 21, first paragraph, please modify the writing, im not trying to say that government is risking people lives, but increase satisfaction among fishermen.
  • Page 21, 3rd paragraph, government not failed in this, but they did not give it the right attention.
  • Page 26, 2nd and 3rd paragraphs need to be changed as well, completely not related.
  • Add executive summary 1 page only.
  • 1.0 Introduction after the summary.
  • 1.1 Background of study (study in Qatar, I did this because im a fisherman, big area of improvement needed etc…)
  • 1.2 The scope of the research.
  • 1.3 research question (how Qatari marines would be improved to satisfy buyers sellers and attract tourists?).
  • 1.4 definition of terms.
  • 2.0 lit review (its already done just arrange it)
  • 2.1 introduction for the lit review. (already done just arrange it)
  • 2.5 ( there is ongoing project to improve the mentioned marines since 2016, but stopped because the project faced a lot of challenges like siege from the neighbor counties, government focused more on 2022 world cup projects and the COVID-19, on the other hand the project faced another environmental challenges due to high restricted clauses, roles, standers and criteria from ministry of environment and municipal agriculture and fisheries affairs.
  • 2.6 add conclusion.
  • 3.6 the targeted population are the fishermen, end users, all involved parties in the renovation of marine’s projects.
  • 4.0 marge the data analysis and finding together.(total should be 15 pages)
  • 4.3 is talking about making profit out of the marines which is not related to the thesis, please modify it. The government should lease the marine for privet sector to encourage privet sector to do good job and earn small amount of money by having low rent which eventually will satisfy the users.
  • Page 23, 4.4 effects of privatization of marines in Qatar. All not related to my thesis, please modify all 4.4 paragraph. Nothing to do with military or protection.

Add the below within the essay:

  • the privet marines that included in this thesis is only the marines from the government which is free, the names of the marines as following: ALDAKHERA marine, alruwais marine, alkhor marine and alwakra marine.
  • I have done an interview and I found out the following, please include it in the interviews part: end users require fishing tools shops in the marine, ice factory, maintenance workshop and car parking area.
  • In the recommendation, I will recommend that government should lease the shops for low rent in order to reduce the overall cost for their products and services which will also reduce the cost of fishes in the market as well as will increase satisfaction.
  • Also its recommended that each marine should have at least on watersport activity shop so it will attract tourists in the marines.
  • Please note that in this thesis I don’t discuss the cargo marines or international ports. Its only governmental marines for the local fishermen and fishing fan boats which are owned by the citizen.

New pages required:

  • 5.0 recommendations, please make the recommendation based on the lit review and other thesis discovery. It should be all concluded from the above study. One of the recommendations is to appoint a focal point in each marine from the citizen live in the same area to represent any points raised from the fishermen without any social media protests. Also, people in the interview said they are ready to pay money for their boat parking just to improve the service, so it’s good supported point to assign a privet company to run the marine’s operation with small amount of yearly subscription. Also points of the recommendation should be explained deeply, (what, why, whom and how)
  • 5.1 how to enhance marine privatization.
  • 6.0 limitation: this research discusses only the 4 governmental marines (aldakhera, alruwais, alkhor and alwakra marine) any marines other than these will not be part of this research.
  • Any marine’s improvement / innovation occurred before 2016 is not part of this research.
  • 7.0 who will be benefited from my thesis? The ministry of transportation & ministry of environment and municipal agriculture and fisheries affairs, because they are the upper hand of the project since they approve all the ideas and fund the project. A privet company who are taking care of the innovation (UDC and MAWANI)   
  • 8.0 conclusion.
  • References (already I did arrangement)
  • Appendices.

Note: I will share with you a layout for alwakra marine innovation plan that you can use in the thesis, to show that I got information from the concerned department.

I need in total 23 pages extra than the attached.

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